nice end!

I LOVE THIS SERIES!!!!

Great series!

hey, it's just like a series before Black Magic!

luv

awwww !!!!!!!!

nawwhh

NO IM NOT

Ok im almost over my addiction.

I came back! Couldnt stay away! SO GOOD

THAT IS SOOOO CUTE AND ROMANTIC! whats a story without a little love <3

omg, that was so a perfect happy ending

cuteeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!

So Cute! i was worried it would be another death note to have a story for the next series xD

awwwwwwwwww

Love it! make more series, pleaseee!!!

I was expecting a total plot twist that would lead to the sequel....but this is good too. <3 the series

is she that girl from black magic now i think that pleae tell me

AWWWWWWW

Lol she doesn't even give about her family rofl

awww!

Awwwwwww Happy ending!!

I wonder if toras..... DEAD

awwwwww!!!

awww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*claps* Bravo!

why did it have to end! sobb sobb

just noticed me. <3

Awwe it was soo great<3

i loved the series a hundred percent!

loved this series,but i wish it could have gone longer or has a squal

awesome.

wow, i hope theres a sequel

100th kudo

soooooo sweet!!!

so niceeeee

Luv the series!!!! cant wait for the sequill!!!

Amazing series! Loved it!

i love it it would be scary if it said somethin like run for your life and ya

perfect ending

Awwwh!!!

awww i loved it!!

anyone who liked this TrainTracks is making a spin-off called Black Magic.

*paid*

*sniffle sniffle, cry, cry *

so cute

wait- he isn't siting NEXT to her..he is sitting INFRONT of her.

awwwwwwn what a cute ending!

what is in his eye

heh

Lol at first when Dane said "So you liked the dog,huh?" I'm like wwwaaahhhh? You ate a dog?At the resturant?? And then I'm like naaahh,it was the present.

PERFECT ENDING! Nicely done Vivz!

L<3ved it!

I love how you did the ending.Great series by the way.

that was a great series one of my fav!

Don't End it?!~?

noooooooo DONT END. MAKE A SERIES TWO

OKAY, GUYS. I JUST WANT TO SAY THIS CAUSE VIVA SAID IT A THOUSAND TIMES. SHE EDITED PERCY INTO DANE. JUST PRETEND DANE IS PERCY. GOSH.

wut happened to pery hobsin? da guy in the intro

Nice ending! But, I'm really sad it's over. I wish I had talent like you. I wish I could LKF this one thousand times.

D'AAAAAAAAW

I decided to edit the guy in the promo, and thaty guy turned out to be Dane.

there is a rose! OMG I SEE IT! I SEE THE ROSE! THE END!

MY HEAD IS ABOUT TO EXPLODE.

Wa- what? What about the guy in the promo? You said he was the main character!

Awesome!

Amazing series, Viva. You did an amazing job on this.

Awww. The perfect ending! I loved that series!

love the ending!

AND THEY HAVE CHEAP FORTUNE COOKIES. THEY MAKE IT OUT OF GRILLED CHEESE? WHAT KIND OF WORLD DO THEY LIVE IN?

SEQUEL?!

THERE'S A SEQUEL?! THERE ALWAYS IS.

aww i love the roses at the end <3 <3 <3

I loved this series Viva,nobody has made a series like this,it was very original,and i really enjoyed reading it.

YAHHHHHHH AWSOM END LOVE IT LOVE IT *throws roses*

Aww

nooooooo! it cant end this series was amazing! but does she ever get back together with her parents? btw nice ending with the rose and the true love is sitting right next to you.

Can't wait for the sequel!

I think there will be a war in the sequel

YAY! A SEQUEL!

UNTILL I SAW THE SEQUEL PARTT

OMG I STARTED FREAKING OUUUT!!!!!

There`s a sequel...

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO .....WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
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Omg Awe!!!!

Amazing series! Luv this like I love cheese!

That's it?! It felt so rushed. Unless there will be a part 2/II

I just love your series viva! they're all so amazing! the ending for this is soooooooo gooooood! and i agree with epical, this should totally be made into a movie

THERE'S A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SQUEEEEEEEEEEEE! I like, LOVED this series and everyday I'd come on and check your user page to see if you made a new one. Can't wait for the sequel!!!

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS SERIES!

fruit thats coming in the sequel

What the!?! what happened to the guy in the promo?

where were the explosions and action, that only happened in 1 part with that other lady

SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUUUUTTTTT
TEEEEEEEHHH!

BEST SERIES EVER MADE IN HISTORY OF BITSTRIPPING.

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SEQUEL!?!?

LOVE THIS. BRAVO!

I guess her parents are out of her life forever

Aw, this is the best episode of the series.

Another amazing series, Viva. Keep up the great work.

Awww, this ending is so good. And not just because I'm in it. It's so cute.

CCUUTTIIIIIIIEEEEEEEESSSSSS
SSS

I just thought of something.. lol this would be a great Movie

D'aaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
wwwwwwwwwwww.........
...............that was one of the cutest series ever.

FRIED RICE!

Uh, yeah. Sorry this episode came pretty quick. Thanks to those who took the time to comment, rate, or even just view this series. I appreciate it alot, that`s what keeps me happy to make these series. So thanks and enjoy.