haiku-sonnet--a form of poetry
invented by uzi bazooka.
Simple Definition--
using 5-7-5 syllable count for haiku,
4 and 2/3 haiku = 1 haiku sonnet.
When kitten attacks,
pigeons scatter, havoc of
breezed leaves fleeing flame.
vacant driveway leads
to puddled pot-holed pavement,
headlights in the rain.
mountain madman now
civilized sips fine bourbon,
has keys and a name,
abides alone and
walks to factory each day,
still slightly deranged.
does he ever miss
living like leaves fleeing flame?
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Outstanding!
Jun 17, '08
So few words to say so much--excellent!
Jun 14, '08
Nice haikus again. Inspiring us to learn The fine art poems.
Jun 14, '08
Now do a Haiku Limerick! Kidding,sir...always a great read!
Jun 14, '08
good job
Jun 14, '08